I like the linework.

I like the idea of the piece. But, I feel like it's hard to tell what's going on if you didn't read the description. I liked how you didn't paint the fire one solid color; good on you! Yeah the wagon does kind of look like a piece of bread, but if you don't put enough detail into a drawing things can become unclear. What'll make it more clear is if you look up some picture of wagons and copy those. All and all, I think if you put a few more hours into redrawing it, it could turn out a lot better next time I'm sure!

Though I'm not familiar with the characters, I still found the story or the part of the story that was written here engaging and pretty entertaining, especially the fight scene. This kind of fantasy is pretty fun to read. If you're looking for inspiration you could take a look at the King Killer Chronicles by Patrick Rothfuss. Anyway good work.